Chapter Twenty-Eight

Eric and Vincent at breakfast is one of my more subtle author conceits.  While Vincent happily chows down on a steak, Eric can’t tolerate the sight or smell of the blood.  Eric is haunted by Roger’s death and Dalhard’s manipulation while Vincent has subconsciously chosen to accept things at face value.

Joe’s confrontation with Dani had very little change from the first draft.  They both care about Michael but are on opposite sides of deciding what should happen. It was emotionally powerful, letting them both come to the realization that they aren’t enemies.  Dalhard’s appearance lets Dani see her real enemy for the first time.  He’s confident enough in his persuasive gifts that he doesn’t feel it’s necessary to resort to any more drastic measures.