Dalhard is starting to have the first inklings that his plan
is beginning to crack apart at the edges.
But like most megalomaniacs and sociopaths, he can’t conceive of anyone
being a true threat to him. His greed is
overwhelming the remnants of his common sense.
I’ve included notes from my research, the inspiration for different scenes and noted some of my favorite lines and moments. Obviously, this commentary contains spoilers, so I’d recommend reading the whole book before reading through them. But that’s just me.
Wednesday, 4 February 2015
Chapter Thirty-Five
The scene with Eric and Bernie was a last minute addition to
the manuscript. My beta readers and editors wanted
more of them and I realized that I hadn’t really taken advantage of their
connection. They are the only two in the
compound who truly understand what Dalhard is doing. It gives Eric a chance to play big-brother
protector and gives Bernie someone she can rely on.
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